Wednesday, October 27, 2010

Sensational Haiku Wednesday

Sensational Haiku Wednesday
Sensational Haiku Wednesday

Welcome to “Sensational Haiku Wednesday!”

Click here for info and background on this weekly event!
The basics:
Haiku is simple! It is 3 non-rhyming lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively (a great way to use your fingers!)

This week’s theme is: Freestyle 

 

Closing my eyes I

can feel the heat of your breath

but you are not there!

 

Closing my eyes I

want your warm embrace to be

real not fantasy!

 

Closing my eyes I

want my memories to be

real in life again!

 

Opening my eyes

I know I am lucky to

have loved before loss. 

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  1. AnonymousWednesday, October 27, 2010 at 4:37:00 PM EDT

    This is beautiful. It is wonderful to be able to love. :) Very well done my friend. Has something happened recently? I do hope you are well and this is just a reflection of something in the past :)

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  2. RiaWednesday, October 27, 2010 at 5:27:00 PM EDT

    This time of year makes me remember a teenage love/crush. He passed 2 years after graduating West Point.

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  3. AnonymousWednesday, October 27, 2010 at 6:36:00 PM EDT

    I especially liked the first one - very vivid and has a sort of urgency.

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  4. AnonymousWednesday, October 27, 2010 at 10:59:00 PM EDT

    Poignant and a bit sad. Love lost but we are different for having known it.
    Victoria

    http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/10/27/sensational-haiku-wednesday-the-ace-of-cups/

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  5. Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog?Thursday, October 28, 2010 at 11:26:00 PM EDT

    Beautiful, Ria! I can feel the loss, and the melancholy. Well done!

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